Wednesday 2 November 2011

Question #3 Hero (Revised)

Peter is the kind of hero who will risk his life just to save others'. Peter has no intention of becoming a hero, his only intention was to save Queen Elizabeth's life from Sir Philip's plot to kill her. Peter is the type of hero who accidentally became a hero. In my point of view, it doesn't matter what your age is or if you're a low or high class person in order to become a hero. At his age of fifteen, I would say that Peter Brownrigg is one remarkable hero in the Queen Elizabeth Era.

One example from the text is when Peter was in one of Sir Philip's tower and heard information about Sir Philip's plot to kill the Queen. And ever since he heard about the plot, he began to realize that he needed to tell people who he only trust about the plot. He knew that he has to save the Queen no matter what happen, even if his life is on the on the line. Peter traveled to a far away place (i forgot what the place is called) just to tell other people like Mr.Desmond etc.. about the plot.

A man named Dr. Jose Rizal is a person who is a hero to me. In fact, most Filipinos consider him a hero because he's a National Hero. He is one of many man who tried to bring Freedom to Philippines and he succeeded. He was killed by his fellow low class Filipino Soldiers because if the low class soldiers don't kill Rizal, then all of the low class soldiers will be killed by the hands of Spaniards. He is also the one who brought back Filipinos into their senses again and to reality as well. He died for ever Filipinos who was and still alive. Both Jose Rizal and Peter Brownrigg saved other people's lives even though they knew there will be consequences and that their lives will be endangered.

4 comments:

  1. John John , I really liked your's !It made alot of sense & I think it was very clear ! Good job :)

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  2. I like that you are bringing in some personal cultural references as it shares yourself more with the reader and they are fairly current examples. To make it even better you should give a little more context to your audience about your Filipino hero as most may be unaware of the general conflict you refer to.
    Remember to review today's tips and guidelines - eg. some paragraphs too short (need more support), introduce the novel to the audience - you refer to it as "the text" and you are still using contractions.
    Looking forward to seeing your continued improvement!

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  3. Johnjohn , i agree with you post because i dont think you could of put it better.( In my opinion ) great job !

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  4. Thank you guys and Ms. Lees, I edited the post a little bit.

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